Wednesday, February 27, 2008
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Today we woke up and got ready to go to rock castle. yesterday night jack and a few of the hunters came and attacked us in the night. i kneed on of them pretty good but they stole piggy's glasses, which they came for, and left. Now that we don't have piggy's glasses we cannot start any fires and our hopes of getting rescued are gone. we could not keep the fire going anyway. there were not enough of us. piggy needs his glasses too. Ralph told us that we need to get them back so we set off to go to jacks castle. we decided to take spears and piggy wanted to cary the conch so he brought it to. when we got there they challenged us and asked us who goes there. i think it was supposed to down our spirits but it did not. then jack came out of the jungle. Ralph told him we wanted the glasses back and called him a thief. he got mad and then Ralph and jack fought. they stopped fighting and piggy explained that giving them back was the right thing to do. they didn't listen. rodger started to throw little rocks and one of them almost hit us. it was very frightening watching all this. then rodger releases a huge bolder and it fell down and glanced piggy. he was knocked off the cliff that we had to walk along on the way up. he fell about 40 feet and his head cracked open, spilling his brains out. the waves carried his body away. Ralph told us that that is what we get, and that he is chief. he threw his spear at Ralph and it cut through his side. other hunters started throwing spears and Ralph ran off into the jungle full of fright. they tied us up and forced us to be part of their tribe. they poked us with spears and gave us no choice.
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4 comments:
Hunter-
I liked your last sentence , "They poked us with spears and gave us no choice." I thought it was a good ending for your blog. The one thing you might want to fix was i noticed that you didn't capitalize a lot of names of beginnings of sentences.
-Sianni
Hunter-
"Now that we don't have piggy's glasses we cannot start any fires and our hopes of getting rescued are gone."
I like this part of your blog because you incorporated the symbolic reason of the fire into samnerics thoughts.
One thing you could change is it's actually Castle rock, not rock castle.
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