Wednesday, January 30, 2008
Blog-2
As we sat around and talked, Ralph suddenly shouted,"we should start a signal fire to get help!" Then jack said, "everyone follow me," and ran into the jungle. The thought of starting a fire was irresistible to the little kids and everyone except me and Ralph ran into the jungle after him. Then ralph went too. "What has happened to order," i thought as i ran after then. By the time i caught up to them they had already made a huge pile of dead trees and branches. As they all started to admit that none of them knew how to start a fire jack suddenly said that they could use my specs and my glasses were nimbly taken from my face. give them back i screamed but no one was listining to me. I scournfully glared at them. as the lit the huge pile on fire they talked about who would keep it lit and how. suddenly the flames spread and engulfed the hole area in which the dead foliage was. Without my glasses my vision was blurry and warped. i started to talk and jack told me to shut up. i officiously did. the broke out into a state of tumult and they screamed and yelled at each other for using up the fire wood. I told them that some of the little one might still be down by the fire and the importance of what they had done. they then started to realize it.
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2 comments:
i really liked the words you used to describe the setting and i thought your's was really descriptive
Hunter-
Can you give me some " marks? Also there are a few little errors. Capitalization and lack of new paragraphs are the ones I'm thinking of. Also can you explain more about the kid with the birth mark?
-Emma
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